Under All Is The Land by Melody Scott

Chapter One

Holly Webber, one month out of real estate school, balanced papers and maps in her left hand. With her right hand, she inserted her electronic key into the lock box hanging from the front doorknob of the house she was showing her clients. She punched in her code and the lock box clicked as the key safe fell open. Fishing out the house key, she reached to slide it into the door lock, but was startled when the door angled inward on its own.

It wasn't locked!

Hmmm. Some dumb agent left this open, she thought, glad it wasn't her listing. What if the builder found this door open? Worse, what if someone's inside showing the house? Then what would she do? Sit out here with her people and wait? That would really mess up her showing schedule.

"I’ll just be a minute," she said to the couple behind her on the sidewalk who were looking over the front of the house.

She stuck her head into the door. "Hello, is anybody here?" Now, that's a dumb thing to say into an empty house, she thought, but she had to establish a routine so she wouldn't forget anything.

The entry door was exquisite: mahogany encased a large oval of beveled cut glass pieces, the intricate design a vase full of roses in various stages of bloom. It’s richness made her feel sure she was showing her clients only the best. She ushered them inside.

A pungent smell of newly cut wood, just-laid carpet and new paint sprang past them and out the open door as if trying to escape into the front yard.

The crisp air of an early fall accompanied them the rest of the way inside as they stepped onto the green slate floor of the entrance foyer. Combined odors in the emptiness were a little stifling, so Holly left the door standing open as she oriented herself to the brand new home's floor plan.

"You'll find the smoking room on the right and the dining room on the left," she instructed as she juggled the things in her hands. She indicated the rooms with a toss of her chin while she sought a ledge where she could put down her unwieldy load. "Wow, look at that crown molding. The kitchen is through that door over there. And look at the walnut paneling of the smoking room...absolutely beautiful. Only three houses in this subdivision have that kind of paneling. I especially wanted you to see it."

She turned to her female client, who had been right behind her, but the woman had already crossed the dining room and disappeared through the door into the butler’s pantry on her way to the kitchen.

Holly rolled her eyes and made the instinctive decision to follow the female client like a puppy dog.

What am I anyway, just a key turner? She thought. These people persist in tearing through the gorgeous houses she shows them like they have only the next one on their minds.

At least the houses were all new and empty. If the homes were resales and full of personal items she'd have a real job of corralling her buyers. Merely two people, they each tore off in opposite directions, one hurrying up stairs and one running down into the basement. It seemed like there were five or six of them instead of only two...like a bunch of little kids running every which way.

However, the woman was buying the house. Since the man was only paying for it, Holly sprinted after the lady.

Before she was half way up the stairwell, a piercing scream penetrated the quiet, causing Holly to drop everything in her hands. Assuming a smoke alarm must have activated, she looked for one on the ceiling above her head. She saw her lady client appear at the top of the stairs instead, her face contorted into a grotesque mask of terror while she screamed and screamed.

Frantic, Holly dashed up the remaining stairs and into the room where the woman pointed while the decibel level increased. The husband emerged on the run from the basement with a look of horror on his face and vaulted the landing between the basement and the lowest of the second floor stairs with one leap.

Lying face up halfway into the closet, was a woman dressed in beige slacks and a green cardigan sweater over what was left of a white blouse. Holly recognized the upside-down gold name tag on the sweater as being from Garrison Realty, where Holly had interviewed before going to work at Redstone. The woman's blouse was ripped open, exposing her bra covered breasts, and "SLUT" was written across her chest in big black letters. The distinctive smell of a black felt-tip marking pen hung in the air.

Holly froze, and everything after that seemed to fall into slow motion as she backed away. Frightened, yet full of pity for the woman on the floor, she ended up pressed against the opposite wall with her head spinning and her eyelids scrunched tightly together. Panic rising, she knew she had to take control of this situation. She'd never seen a dead person, but decided it was a lie that they simply looked asleep. This woman was purple, had nasty dark bruises and looked very much dead.

Holly made herself feel for life signs in the woman’s neck like they do on TV, but the hand she reached out seemed to belong to somebody else. She wasn’t prepared for the cold clammy feel of the woman's skin, but that helped to determine there was no life in that body. She wished the woman on the stairs would stop screaming; it was hard to think when adrenaline was pumping through her and she was touching a dead body.

Despite the temperate air of fall in the house Holly shivered as she reached for her cell phone.

Maria Sebastian drove through thickly overhung red and yellow and gold maple, oak, and poplar trees up to the row of mailboxes at the end of a dirt road off Warhill Park Road. It looked like fantasy land under the arched branches where ferns, huge rhododendrons and mountain laurels spread their leaves out like a tablecloth at a picnic. She pulled to the left and was forced to stop at a gate. From up the hill at the other end of the driveway a shirtless young man stepped out of a mobile home. Muscles rippled down his stomach, and his chest muscles were so defined he looked pumped up from a recent workout. He must be the son of Houston Brace, the man who had called her about pricing his land. One of his relatives had been a previous client of Maria’s.

The young man was barefoot, wore cutoff jeans and his right arm was missing from below the elbow. His small body had no tan lines. Light brown curly hair softened the chiseled cut of his jaw. Incongruously dark long eyelashes outlined cobalt blue eyes that held a smile. He opened the gate and held out his left arm to shake hands. "Ms. Sebastian? I’m Houston Brace." He was her contact after all.

She thought his name sounded like a college handbook publisher.

"I can show you the land, but it ain't really mine yet," he explained. "My parents died when I was a baby and Mrs. Lacy, Sheila, took me to raise because there wasn’t nobody else.

"Her son, Billy--do you know him? Billy Lacy? He builds houses around here, I thought you might know him."

Maria nodded. Everybody knew Billy Lacy. He was a colorful builder who drew his own plans on the back of cardboard boxes. There had been no building restrictions in Dawson County when he’d started building years earlier, and he’d survived due to the good ol’ boy system of sliding things under the table. Sometimes it was money; usually it was permits.

Houston went on. "Ms. Lacy's going to transfer title to me on this land 'cause she don’t trust Billy to keep it in one piece. She thinks he’ll cut it all up to build houses and it won’t stay together. This is between you and me." He looked knowingly, questioningly at her as he nodded his head up and down persuading her compliance.

"Of course," she replied.

As he talked, he entered the woods, gesturing to her to follow.

She felt a kind of ageless wisdom emanating from the spread of giant red oak limbs covered with crimson leaves at the height of their swan song. The undergrowth branches were so dense she had to unstick each clinging briar individually or risk holey jeans. Brushing them off was an ineffective struggle, yet Houston Brace slipped through them, unharmed, clothed mostly in skin.

He struck a dog trot path, which he referred to as a "pig trail," and followed it down into a ravine, all the while considering out loud the property's value as compared to other properties belonging to friends and relatives.

At the bottom of the ravine a little creek trickled over rocks, along mossy banks and through fern laden sand beds that could have been miniature fairy parks. Coming upon a pool deeper than the shallow creek bed, where Houston submerged his left arm up to his shoulder and, with a grin, pulled up a six pack of coke cans, offering one to his companion. "This here spring bubbles up and keeps my cokes cooler than my refrigerator."

She laughed, accepted the coke, taking time to examine the mouth of the spring more closely. A fascinating gift of the earth, precious pure water initiated its emergence into daylight through an arch no less impressive than a niche in a cathedral wall.

Maria had to remind herself this was a job and not a picnic with a youngster with nothing but sweet simplicity on his mind. She could have stayed in the woods for a week.

The fifty-two acre parcel was covered all too quickly and she had a pretty good idea of how it lay. Soon she would verify the lines with Dawson County's overlay maps.

She hated to part with the man-child but, as she was leaving, her pager sounded off relentlessly. Waving, she pulled out of the driveway. The rolling hills of northern Georgia prevented cell phone transmission, so she headed south, alerted to some urgency she could not imagine. Her pager persisted.

"What in the world?" Maria said out loud as she tried over and over to call her office.

Finally, she heard, "Maria, where are you?" from the secretary as she entered transmittal range.

"I’m up here wandering around Dawson with Mr. Nature Person. What a character. I’ll tell you all about it when I get back. I’m headed for the office because my pager loaded up with calls I can’t make from this far north."

"Get back here as soon as you can. All hell has broken loose and Giles has called in all of the agents."

"Oh God, what’s happened," she said flippantly. "Has someone figured out how to get more money out of us?"

"No, Penny’s been killed."

"Whaaat?"

"Get here quick. I’ve got all my lines ringing at once."

Maria pulled onto the berm of the freeway while she tried to adjust to the news. They’ve obviously made a mistake, she thought, with her head buzzing. I saw that woman this morning. A million questions zinged through her head but every phone number she tried rang busy. Frustrated, she pulled out into the slow lane and dialed into her voice mail where she listened to Donna Delaney, Eileen Davis, and Tommy Larken call her in various stages of panic, alarm and grief. They were realtors, friends, and a homicide detective from the sheriff’s office.

 

 

© Melody Scott

 

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